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Tuesday, July 06, 2010

Rebound Chapter 34: Logos

You guyzz laish im not gettin wayd comments ;( adre fe followers but laish u don't comment

walla us writers feel more encouraged if we know ina fe people reading it even if you have something bad to say 3ade i accept criticism 3al a8al i know what i have to change or what i have to do

So plz try to comment.. ma a7b as2l ppl to comment ya3ne itha someone wants to comment they'll comment w ili ma yabe 3la ra7ta bs walla when i see wayd comments 3la my post it makes me smile to know ina fe nas ga3den ygron...

Anywaaayyzz baskt al7en adre wayd solaft hehe.. ENJOOY :***

   Razan was put off at the sight of the living room and was too confused. She quickly turned around to find Aseel standing to close to her with an angry look on her face and one eyebrow raised. "5al9eni dshaay!" Aseel still didn't take a look inside and so she didn't know what was waiting for them. "Yeah bs Ase..." Aseel cut Razan off before she made up one of her excuses again to get out of thisx. "Mako bs yaallaaa!!" She whispered to Razan so that no one would hear them but she said it in a very firm voice. "Ee bs mako a7aad!" Razan looked at Aseel and shrugged her shoulders. "Haa??" Aseel moved Razan out of the way and stepped inside only to realize what Razan meant. The living room was empty mafeha a7ad. "Wain ra7aw??" She wasn't talking to anyone in particular.

   "Madree Aseel.. Jenna kanat yaya bro7ha wla shno? Maybe she left.." Aseel walked out of the living room and headed towards the main entrance. "La ana i picked her up makant tbe she drives here bro7ha. Mu ma38ola someone picked her up ya3ne mara7 etdg la 3la oboha wla that awful husband of hers..." Aseel opened the door and looked outside. She froze in her place as she was looking outside onto the garden and driveway. 

   "Aseel shfech chthe wagfa? shno??" Razan walked up behind Aseel and wanted to squeeze through to take a look for herself. "HAA? LA LA.. i mean.. e7m.. la mako shay" Aseel quickly blocked the way not allowing Razan to squeeze through but this time Razan wasn't going to let Aseel have her way. She pushed Aseel squeezing her against the big glass and metal door and stood outside.

   At first she didn't notice anything out of the ordinary until she saw a car pulling out of the driveway. It took a few seconds for her to register what the car was. It was  Range Rover. It didn't click at first until she saw something at the back of the car that caught her attention. It was a sticker that looked like a logo. Then it hit her and it hit her hard "UUUUHHHHHHHHHHH" She gasped so loudly and turned around with an appalled look on her face. She knew who the person in the car was from the logo.

   She never knew the logo before but that day when 7amad was to suppose to come 3shan y56bonha. She saw that logo and even though she didn't make an effort the remember it it somehow was there in her memory. At that very moment she wished she hadn't looked around at the place too eagerly and studied the design of the building because she wouldn't have seen the logo. She wouldn't have known who the car belongs to. She didn't want to know.
 
   Aseel was lost in her own world. She was staring at the screen of her phone not noticing how Razan gasped. "Aseel did you just see that car!!" Razan stood their staring at Aseel waiting for a reply but she got nothing. She noticed how tense Aseel was. Her face looked like she's seen a ghost or something. She slowly lifted her head up looking at Razan still not noticing that she has been asked a question. "HELLOO! shnoo?" Razan waved her hands in front of Aseel's face. "Hmm?" She didn't know what Razan was saying she spaced out. "Shfeh wayhech chthe intay??"

   Razan snatched the mobile out of her hand to see what on earth scared her so much. "NO NO RAZAN please give it BAACCK!!" She tried to get the mobile back but Razan gave her a firm glare that made her feel a shiver shoot up and down her spine. She has never gotten that look for Razan, ever. She stood there with her hands stretched out in mid air and then slowly lowered them not knowing what to expect next.

   She looked at the screen which was open on a message so she read it. It must be the cause for Aseel to space out. Once she read it she couldn't believe her eyes. This can't be happening. She kept reading the message over and over again trying to register what the words on the screen meant. She lifted her head up and looked Aseel in the eyes. Aseel didn't know what to say she had a sad sorry look in her eyes. At that moment she wished she didn't push Razan to coming downstairs. They could have avoided all of this but no she had to insist.

   Razan walked and almost threw the phone on the ground but she didn't. Instead the held Aseel's hand and gently places the phone on her palm and left her walking into the house. Aseel can't blame her for any decisions she makes right now. If she was in Razan's place she would analyze things in the same way. She turned around to see Razan walking with her head down. Just by looking at her figure you can tell she was broken. Broken beyond repair, she would need a lot of help from the people around her to pull her up to the surface again.

   Aseel walked back in behind her and closed the door leaning on it. She didn't know where to go from there.  Razan stood at the bottom of the stairs and turned around "Aseel ana bro7 anam, your more than welcome to stay and spend the night il bait baitch intay mu '3areeba bs i need to sleep." She gave her a slight side smile and went up the stairs. Her eyes were empty, emotionless, almost dead. She felt helpless and useless. All she could do was pray that Razan won't insist on believing her own conclusions cause she knows there was a perfectly good explanation for this.

   Razan can't be right. 7amad can't possibly want Jenna again. He can't possibly choose her over Razan. She knew him too well. She was the only one who could see the sparks and love in his eyes. She can't be mistaken. She looked down at her phone again and read the message for one last time.

   Jenna called me ma3ndaha a7ad yrdha and she felt awkward eb bait Razan so i just picked her up 3shan awadeha, ttyl let me know what happens please.


   Aseel pushed herself off the door and went upstairs to Razan's room. This was going to be a long painful night and Razan is going to need a shoulder to cry on. This is killing her she can't see them like this anymore. She just can't, she needs to do something, anything. Even if it doesn't work. This definitely is going to be a long night of consoling and planning.

9 comments:

  1. Saaaad post :(!

    will he leave her?

    Post ASAP please *puppy eyes* :P

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  2. I seriously dont blame u for ur intro cus u deserve more comments 3ala ketabtich ili beyond amazing....ana a9lan an6ir 3ala naaaaar until u post ...u writing skills r totally different than others...ana 3an nafsi amoot 3ala ur blog....i hope u know that :*

    i love how descriptive this post was and i so didnt expect that jenna left...7asait that was such a coward thing to do... and 7amad OH 7AMAD WHAT HAVE U DONE!!!!!!!
    MU KAFI EL BENT GALBIHA MNKISIR....7IS FEEEHA YA RAYAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAL...shakli ill sleep over with them to console her cus ga6i3at galbi mskeeena razoona....aseeeeeeeeeeeeeeel fix this 3ashan we get u a man as a reward :D lol

    love you and love your blog :* BELIEVE IN URSELF CUS UR WORTH BELIEVING IN

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  3. Wai3, wai3, wai3. Im starting to hate Hamad! Please post soon. I never commented before, but I really want to know what's going to happen next;p. Please make this blog come to happy ending!

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  4. a77! maskeena razan! but she always jumps to conclusions.
    pooosstt soon pleasee!:*

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  5. Btw .. Tra fe wayed people i know reads your story But they dont comment! so dont worry! wayed reads your story! and they love it :D

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  6. slamii: hehe inshalai will post soon 3shan il puppy eyes :* and thans for letting me know ina fe people reading i just want a few more comments 3ashan a7s fe nas ga3den ygron ;(

    nawarii: thanks for understanding why ktabt hal intro and thanks 3la kilshay tgwlena walla i can never come up with something to say 3ala kl il7che ili tgwlena

    hehehe ee yalla me and you sleep over to console her ;p and inshala aseel will eventually get a man lazem

    7yate inta thank u inshala i do believe in myself and thank u soo much for believing in me :***

    anony: hehe nooo don't hate 7amad walla mabek u hate him ;p and thanks for commenting now! i promise the ending of this story inshala ra7 ya3jbkm kilkum

    blue lilies: inshaaala will be posting soon :**

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  7. Ur story is beyond amazing! I hope u post soon, and we all love u!!!!:** oo hammad shway e8eth, ya3nee shako raye7 oo ma5eth jenna min bait razan??

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  8. anony: thank u 7bebti :** hehe ee adre y8eth 9aaa777!! lo ana mukan razan i wud punch him !! ;p

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  9. Please, please, please, please, please post soon!!!!! Im hooked!!!!! I love you blog!!!!

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